Can You Freestyle...

RediRock

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Re: Can You Freestyle...

asgje ne koken time, akoma perpiqem te shkruaj,
disa here ne gjuhen time, disa here ne gjuhe te huaj,
ky xhan i zemres djeg, me ben te bej te pabera,
qaj kur jam i lumtur, qesh kur me dhemb zemra,
6 vjet larg familjes, lotet me jane thare,
kjo jete e felliqur, se gjalli me ka ndare,
sa me ka marre malli, per nje dasem shqiptare,
per nje gote raki, per nje goce korcare /pf/images/graemlins/wink.gif ,
qofte dhe nga tirona, nuk bejme diskriminime,
por me mungon shqiperia, ne kete jeten time,
me mungojne rruget, me mungojne te shtenat,
me mungojne pubet, me mungojne te zenat,
me mungojne gazetat, kafenete plot,
me mungojne shoqeria, ikem lesh per kot,
shpresa nuk ka vdekur, por dalengadale po tretet,
si qiriu i naimit, vetem dyll do t'mbetet,
babush me ka marre malli, mami kur do te te shoh,
vellacko sa do jesh rritur, s'di a do te te njoh,
i hyme kurbetit te rinj, mustaqen pa djersitur,
morrem detin me kembe, burra te parritur,
nejse ja ku jam, nuk ka me kthim nga mbrapa,
o vdes o behem bos, fatin per fyti e kapa,
jeta eshte e veshtire, por nuk eshte e pamundur,
derisa te vdes, asnjehere sdo dal i humbur,
u linda duke qare, do vdes duke qeshur,
u linda lakuriq, do vdes si princ i veshur,
nuk di ne me kuptoni, nuk dua te me pelqeni,
por para kritikimit, dua qe te me ndjeni,
ndjeni dhimbjen time, lagu nga lotet e mi,
se dhimbjen e kurbetit, jo cdokush e di,
mua me dridhet buza, mamase i dridhet dora,
babai me zor mban lotet, telefoni bie nga dora,
me mijera milje larg, edhe me shume kilometra,
pertej atlantikut, nga gjoksi po me del zemra,
ah sikur ta dinit, ah sikur......c'te them,
sa me shume kerkon ngushellim, aq me shume dhembje gjen,
mjaft me, tani do e mbyll, me falni per dobesine,
por kisha nevoje te shfryja, te perzeja merine,
kete lirike per ju, B-More e shkruan nga zemra,
problemet jane te njejta, nje hall me shume emra...
 

X-GoodBoy

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Well, B-more, I feel ur pain,
we got the same thing, we share the same.
been here 4 years , now is going to five,
and been through a lots of things, but still I'm alive.
we had two choices before we left,
stay there with family, friends, or fly away from our nest.
well, as it can be seen, we choose the second one,
it hard to accept, but life is not always fun.
so, live as you still can, and think for the future,
'cose we started now, this is a real adventure.
Your words are touchy hommie, I can dig you,
Take a beer and enjoy it, that's what I always do.


Peace bro.
 

katina

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Yeah, yeah, yeah
The game is still being played
Our playaz are getting better each day
These pages are being filled
Quantity and quality is being felled
B-More, fu&k, he’s the best rapper this place will ever have
Boy you’ve made history, your rhymes are like a spell
Everyone that has read them, has fell
In the dark side of our Albanian bad ***
Whose beat makes the girls shake their ***
B., you said you gots to have a goc korcare
You’re like o korcare o hic fare
…. Anyway…what’s the deal with these other hotties
Whose cursing are their hobbies
They can’t drop a line without mentioning the word fu&k
What? Do they just get stuck
And they can’t think of other words to fill it up?
Whatever it is…you game’s still in the biz
Just don’t make this place freeze,
We gotta keep it real
Let others know how we feel
I think other girls should get involved too
I know you can drop a line or two.
We should let our Albanian guys
Know that we don’t got just the Thais
That makes you guys say wow
Yeah we got it all, but we keep it low
Now we got to show them that we also got the flow
Freestyling ain’t our thing
But that don’t mean that we don’t think
On dropping a line or two
With metaphors and similes going smooth.
Now that I’m back
I’m gonna try to earn back my respect
It’s been a long time
Your girl hasn’t been around
But now she’s found
And she’ll be here…so here have a beer
Lets have a party
Here have a Bacardi
Or do you want me to bring the we$d in
-Kidding-
Now I’m leaving….
Hollaaaaaa
Its good to be back……
With respect it’s your girl (k)
 

RediRock

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goca e urte is back, better late than never,
her lines have got longer, her flow is more clever,
i'm glad to see you drop, your lyric in here that is,
cause those other kind of droppings, might just hurt your knees /pf/images/graemlins/wink.gif ,
faleminderit per komplimentin, smendoj se e meritoj,
por jashtemase ma ben qejfin, prandaj do e pranoj,
me kishte marre malli, per vargjet e vajzave tona,
nga jersey tek new york, nga korca tek tirona,
pranoj mendimin tend, me shume vajza duhet te rimojne,
shume nga ne djemte ketu, duam te dine cfare mendojne,
pra kjo eshte nje ftese e hapur, to all women who can rhyme,
let us know what you thinking, come here and drop a line...
 

katina

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time is tickin away
and i don't see no ladies making a say
i'll be waiting and b. thanks for the respond...it makes me think that my style ain't fainting......word
peace k's out
 

katina

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Re: Can You Freestyle...

yeah...here i'll sing uz a song

time is ticking away
you gotta..live your life
day by day
happy urself
good or bad
life is too short you gotta live it away
come on peeps speak it out
let it go without a doubt
 

RediRock

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time is ticking away, one day at a time,
every hour goes by, new lines in my mind,
sometimes i just sit, ask myself what life is,
why were we put here, what my purpose is,
is it to go to school, is it to graduate,
is it to make money, or is it just by fate,
do we decide our path, or is it already decided,
is fate on our side, or do we have to fight it,
it's hard to answer that, if you can go ahead,
because the truth is bitter, we wanna hear lies instead,
what if i told you, you have no control,
what happens in your life, someone else makes the call,
that's hard to understand, even harder to accept,
we think we are somebody, there is no truth in that,
we are just a piece, in this chess game called life,
while gods play each other, changing our life,
have you ever noticed, how nothing can go right,
but then everything falls together, in the middle of one night,
no matter how hard you try, things happen at their own time,
if you are trying to rush it, go ahead, waste your time,
have you ever notice, how when you want something really bad,
you never end up getting it, you get the opposite instead,
but when you don't think about it, act like you don't care,
stuff just falls in your lap, it happens everywhere,
i don't know about you, but for me that's scary,
i don't like being played, my feelings can get weary,
but what is the other choice, can't bang against the wall,
can't jump this ladder too high, believe me you will fall,
what a sad thought that is, no control over my fate,
an appetite for destruction, but i clean the plate,
j-z said that one first, no one could say it better,
i will stop right now, before i get any sadder...
 

katina

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Look who’s signed on
It’s ur girl (k) who got the grove on
I ain’t gonna try to turn you on
But if uz want some
All I got to say is….it’s on
I’m tasty like the famous Bonbon
No my body don’t consist of only the skin and bones
I got some fat on me that guys love to feel
It adds pleasure to the field
I love guys that are build
And those who be whispering like a bird
When I walk down your street
You can’t resist to at least speak
You ask for my number but instead you just get a smile
Cauze I’m the Albanian heat
I don’t like to go on speed
Don’t wanna mess with you
If you ain’t Albanian you ain’t getting a shit boo
I know how the Latinos play the game
The Americans are just the same
I think their style is lame
Don’t wanna fall for their tricks
Boy, I’m not like those chicks
I ain’t really a fan on sucking dicks
See I’m speaking what’s on my mind
Even if the lines don’t really rhyme
I think I’m doing just fine
At least I’m jotting something down
My droppings are going word by word, and line by line
And b. I’m about to keep on dropping
Like my low cut jeans are going down my knees
My thong would be flashed on the scene
Would you drop down your baggy pants
Wanna get into action…boy I need to see your license and registration
If you got a new inspection
Lets start with the subtraction.
This beat is about to go on the low
Can’t wait to see who’s the master of the next flow
If you ain’t busy give us a show
If you don’t want to …its okay, just don’t be flying away like a crow
I hope my hotties ain’t growing a frau
Now your girl has gots to go
Keep it going, keep it showing, keep it blowing

Word out, shout out, make us Albanians proud.
 

RediRock

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goca e urte is in the spot, she's making the scene hot,
almost made me take a trip, believe or not,
your low cut jeans, thrown in the cut,
your thong on the side, out is the butt,
my baggy jeans on my knees, your knees on my elbows,
hitting the right spot, almost make you say vows,
right now gotta go, but i'll be back for more,
i'm gonna show you smth, that you never seen before....
 

Enion

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Yo yo yo!
Hey whats up guys, I've come here so soon
I've come in the party,that begins this afternoon
I like to dance with chicks,all the night in this saloon
Now I'm busting some rhymes, under this clear moon
Let I tell the story,about a guy I met in a store
He put his glock in my head,and pushed me out of the door
Then I took out my knife,and I hited him more and more
This m*********r felt down,and yes, I made a score
Por me sinqeritet ju them,se une jam penduar
jo se e kisha une fajin,se une kurr skam gabuar
Te gjithe e trashim zerin, me thike dhe pistolet ne duar
Tani policia po me ndjek gjithe vendin per te me arrestuar
Sot ne shqiperi puna eshte bere shume keq
vret vllai vllain sy nder sy dhe gjithcka merr per dreq
Armet ne shtepi shqiptari, gjalle ne bote si heq
This were my last words, couse I am too sad
All the things in my head, are going to make me mad
So all you people that read this words, forget what I said
 

RediRock

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knifes and gunz, plus rage and anger,
all said in other words, clear and present danger,
it's easy to get heated, so easy to pull that trigger,
but then what's gonna happen, you have no time to figure,
you are living on the run, hiding from your shadow,
scared that soon your wife, will be called a widow,
you are hiding from the news, your face keeps poping up,
by the end of the day, the whole country knows what's up,
little did you know, police knows where you are,
too many snitches around, you never go too far,
so come 6 in the morning, wake up in your motel bed,
instead of going out, you are surrounded instead,
so now what do you do, nobody to kidnapp,
can't hold nobody hostage, damn it's getting bad,
so you walk out the door, your barrel in your head,
threatening the police, that you will kill yourself,
they start backing up, cause they think you crazy,
the sun is coming up, your eyes are getting dazy,
you keep on yelling out, move back or i'm squezzing,
and than out of nowhere, you have to be sneezing,
you get this bad nose itch, the sneeze is coming now,
police is getting nervous, you're moving too much now,
snipers got you targeted, helicopters in the air,
just then you realize, that life is never fair,
and then your sneeze comes, and so do 30 shots,
5 come to your head, you feeling your blood clots,
laying on your own blood, everything starts fading,
you start seeing your childhood, too late now to be praying,
your body is getting cold, paramedics try keep you alive,
but nothing they can do, will stop the final drive,
you finally met death, no introductions needed,
she's been your one companion, from the first time you bleeded,
she comes takes you away, you are gone and done forever,
now go back to that shooting, shouldn't have you been clever,
shouldn't you not have squeezed, rather just pistol whipped,
shouldn't you just beat him, and then you could have dipped,
should have, could have, would have, all that is not an option,
cause now we drink your coffe, the ultimate death potion,
while you lay in a coffin, your lips sawn together,
we promise your mother love, you'll be with us forever,
time is ticking away, we lower you to the ground,
everything just goes silent, nobody makes a sound,
we cover you in flowers, with good words and honest tears,
this is what i call, THE SUM OF ALL FEARS...
 

Enion

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Thank you for the words, but I'm still alive
I am so far now, I've done everything to survive
Everytime I think the story, I dont know why I live
I tried to go to the police,they will never belive


Kjo eshte hera e pare qe une kam rimuar
krijimi im i pare, eshte historia qe ju kam treguar
Fjalet qe une shkruajta, ne te vertet mos i besoni
Prandaj keto qe thashe,si te verteta mos i tregoni
Ne temen freestyle une rastesisht u futa
Edhe une pastaj,thelle ketu u zhyta
Them se do e mbyll, me nuk kam per te shkruar
keto dite qe vjen, kam shume gjera per te menduar
Edhe per ket fushe,nuk jam shume i interesuar
thjesht provova veten,a isha ne gjendje per te krijuar
Ishte nje kenaqsi, te shkruaja ketu me ju
I know I have no talent,I dont wish this for you
 

RediRock

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mua me vjen keq, qe thua se ske talent,
sepse me duket mua, ketu ti veten gjen,
nese eshte krijimi i pare, man i couldn't tell,
the way the flow was going, the way the lines felt,
i di qe je gjalle /pf/images/graemlins/laugh.gif , dhe qe ishte histori,
une po t'pasoja topin, qe ta vazhdoje ti,
do te me vinte keq, ketu po spostove me,
sepse ti ke talent, dhe e di kete gje /pf/images/graemlins/wink.gif ,
nejse enion nejse, shume fat ne jeten tende,
welcome to the freestyle spot, lirikat jane shume te kendshme...
 

li

Forumium praecox
Re: Can You Freestyle...

Fillimisht postuar nga EnIoN:
[qb] Yo yo yo!
Hey whats up guys, I've come here so soon
I've come in the party,that begins this afternoon
I like to dance with chicks,all the night in this saloon
Now I'm busting some rhymes, under this clear moon
Let I tell the story,about a guy I met in a store
He put his glock in my head,and pushed me out of the door
Then I took out my knife,and I hited him more and more
This m*********r felt down,and yes, I made a score
Por me sinqeritet ju them,se une jam penduar
jo se e kisha une fajin,se une kurr skam gabuar
Te gjithe e trashim zerin, me thike dhe pistolet ne duar
Tani policia po me ndjek gjithe vendin per te me arrestuar
Sot ne shqiperi puna eshte bere shume keq
vret vllai vllain sy nder sy dhe gjithcka merr per dreq
Armet ne shtepi shqiptari, gjalle ne bote si heq
This were my last words, couse I am too sad
All the things in my head, are going to make me mad
So all you people that read this words, forget what I said [/qb]
nqs kjo qe thua , eshte e vertet
mos u merzit vella, per kaq mos u tret
jo per gje, por te gjithe gabojme
me arme ne brez nuk arrijme te gjykojme
eshte nje fjale qe diku e kam degjuar
them se eshte e vjeter, sepse edhe e kam lexuar
TE PRANOSH DHE TE KUPTOSH GABIMET E TUA,
ESHTE DIÇKA E MIRE
DHE PER TY VELLA , UROJ TA KESH KETE DESHIRE

{-_-*
 

li

Forumium praecox
Re: Can You Freestyle...

hej baltimore , e ke hallall byrazer
ta kam thene me perpara dhe do ta them perhere
nuk e di per te tjeret
per mua
i respektuar do te jesh ngahere

rap dimensionin e ke mbajtur gjalle
meshkuj femra, te gjitheve u ke bere balle
ke patur sukses dhe gjithmone do te kesh
i pari ke qene, dhe vazhdon te jesh
ke ndryshuar diçka, ne ato qe rimon
rap shqip, e sheh sa bukur tingellon


:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
 

fallen angel

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lookin' 4 my people,back in the jungle
what's up mates hit that bungle
just wanted hi to say
cause a while i have to stay
hit that b,u're the finest
learn people how to rhymeest
like in lean back and don't say nuthin'
make them listen and just cruisin'
i'll cut this shit,i'm out of here
just chill it out,here's a beer!


gimme 5!
 

RediRock

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mirdita pra, si jeni, si ndiheni ju sot,
a i arritet qellimet, apo iku dita kot,
lexova vargjet e LI, mu be jashte mase qejfi,
s'harrove miqte e vjeter, per pak na ngeli qejfi,
kujtova se me s'rimoje, por me provove gabim,
rrofsh per fjalet e fundit, me bukur skan si t'vin,
gjithashtu dhe fallen, faleminderit per fjalen e mire,
per rapera si ju, kjo teme ka shume deshire,
deshire dhe nevoje, nevoje dhe dashuri,
mireserdhet serish, fallen... edhe LI,
sot eshte nje dite e re, ne te njejten jete te vjeter,
nuk di nga tia filloj, ah te kisha nje jete tjeter,
nje shans i dyte te me jepej, ti beja gjerat persembari,
kaq nevoje per te korrigjuar, gabimet qe nga i pari,
kam filluar te humb shpresen, drita ka filluar te zbehet,
ne fund te tunelit te jetes, pesimizmi ka filluar te shprehet,
gota gjysem bosh a plot, une s'shoh uje fare,
ju betohem qe ndihem keq, cdo dite vetem shoh varre,
shoh rinine qe vazhdon, te humbase jeten cdo dite,
shoh adoleshenta qe vriten, ne mos shoket e tu, te mite,
shoh prinder qe po robtohen, ne menyre qe te jene te varfer,
ky eshte cmimi qe paguan, kur jeton nje jete te paster,
punojme qe te jemi paleke, se rrogat kurre nuk dalin,
nje gabim i vogel, buken e gojes ta marrin,
kjo qeveri kerme, dhe kjo opozite me e ndyre,
tallin k*qet me gjithe shqiptaret, marrin jetet nga nje zyre,
kur do te behemi njerez, kur do njohim dashurine,
kur do te ndihmojme njeri tjetrin, kur do ta lejme merine,
shqiperi moj e pafate, kur u ndane kaq te rane,
se gjithe shpresa e atdheut, gjithmone ne kurbet vane,
qe ne ditet e fan nolit, e deri me sot ne 2004,
gjithe historia e ketij vendi, duket si aktoret qe luajne teater,
te gjithe presim per fundin, e kesaj endrre te pambaruar,
shpresoj qe deri ate dite, te gjithe nuk kemi degjeneruar,
une jam larg teje, shqiperi, nuk te shoh dot,
por fjalet tona dhe vuajtjet tona, kurre mos shkofshin kot,
nejse miq nejse, kjo teme eshte per rap freestyle,
por ky fati yne i ndyre, ne fyt me ka ngelur si hale,
ika tani mirupafshim, mos e leni temen e thate,
sepse po bete ndryshe, do t'ju behet dita nate...
 

teab

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Ketu te tema juaj,
dy rreshta thashe ti shkruaj,
qe B-se ti them "hajt beju burre"
dhe kot mos u qaj,
se jeta nuk eshte kaq e trishtuar
sa ne vargjet qe ti ke shkruar. /pf/images/graemlins/wink.gif

Hajt tung, dhe na bej ndonje vizite se shpejti!
 

RediRock

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ja ku na erdhi t-tonic, don't mix it with gin tonic,
buzeqeshjen ne buze, se vej dot, how ironic,
jeta seshte e trishtuar, eshte nje loje pokeri,
ku arma per te fituar, asnjehere ska qene nderi,
t-tonic apo titanik, where is the iceberg at,
cause when you see that coming, that's the end of that,
nejse zemra nejse, shume shpejt do te takohemi,
sado trishtuar jeta, prape do te perqafohemi,
me fatin dhe fatkeqesira, me vuajtje dhe lumturi,
what life has in the future, it's still for us to see...
 

RediRock

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ne shtepi erdha une, thashe ti them dy fjale,
por si fatkeqesisht, te gjithe paskan dale,
4 dite 0 postime, te jete e vertete,
a ka te tjere ketu, apo kam ngelur vete,
nejse nuk merzitem, kam mjaft lirika neper krijime,
sepse jeta eshte lirike, ne liriken e jetes time,
lexo por mos shkruaj, shkruaj por mos ofendo,
ofendo por jo direkt, sdi mo cfare me bo,
fjalet nuk kane plumba, por shume ndjenja vrasin,
i bejne robt nervoze, nga nervat pothuajse plasin,
zoti na bekoi, na dha gjuhe e tru,
por sna i dha per sport, ne pune duhet me i vu,
a me degjon g-nature, a me degjon kristofer,
LI a me ndjen vella, te tjereve bejini nje nder,
kur flisni ne kete teme, nuk flisni vetem per vete,
perfaqsoni shume te tjere, ne atdhe dhe ne kurbete,
ndaj mos leni te tjeret pa ze, juve jeni fjala e tyre,
nuk them te shkruani kot, kete se keni per detyre,
megjithate e di shume mire, qe brenda gjoksit keni mllef,
shume gjera ju ngrejne nervat, you can't act like you're deaf,
ca gjera nuk injorohen, si e ardhmja e kesaj shqiprie,
si leket per buken e gojes, si jeta e nje femije,
nejse miq nejse, b-more se ben dot vete,
kam nevoje per ju, eshte e vetmja e vertete,
kjo teme filloi si shaka, por shakaja doli per tjeter,
mos ti ngaterrojme gjerat, me "can you freestyle..." e vjeter,
na thoni se cfare ndjeni, cfare hallesh keni perballe,
na thoni cfare ndihme doni, keshtu dalengadale,
tema do te nderroje natyre, do behet nje vend diskutimi,
ku mbizoterojne ndjenjat, hallet, dhe RIMIMI,
b-more eshte ketu gjithmone, nje vesh per hallin tend,
nje dore qe te ngren nga balta, dikush qe te do me gjithe mend,
pra ejani o miq, le te ndihmojme njeri tjetrin,
te voglin ose te madhin, te riun ose te vjetrin...
 
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