Can You Freestyle...

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manasquan

Forumium praecox
Re: Can You Freestyle...

po qesh me f*ckin Sikur , si mund ta quash veten burr
po t'isha n'vendin tend man,do isha mbytur me 1 pik shurr
kjo gje do talent,cop delli mos u mundo kot
dhi e zgjubur bishtin perpjete ,man nuk e ben dot
sje aq i zot
mos u kruj me Kristofer,se akoma motren po ta q*
jam e REAL GANSTA te bej 2 rima ne t'njejten fjali
me sa shof me ty eshte harxhim kohe,jo kenaqesi
nuk je per rivenc ,as shitje menc,akoma sisen e mamit je tuj pi
lirika ime e pandalshme,do dgodaz si e detit val
une do jem ai qe n'fund do t'bej ty p*dhmotre t'thuash m'fal
kush eshte ky tjetri?,cfar do te thuash?
mendova se k*ret jane me numra,por ka sa te dush
nuk t'mora vesh 1 fjal,as anglisht as shqip
nuk po q*j per Drej , and others ,kam stilin tim garip
pse ligesia juaj te bardhen do ta bej t'zeze
tregoni respekt ,te merni te njejten,dhe boll me ket STUPID teze
 
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jessi

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Re: Can You Freestyle...

hahahahahahahahha ...kristofer me vdiqe duke qeshur mos vdeksh kurre
 
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RediRock

Primus registratum
Re: Can You Freestyle...

get the f*ck out of here....

b*tches like sikur say they don't like rap,
so what you doing here, waiting for your neck to snap?
sikur ti te ishe raper, sikur ti te ishe burre,
sikur ti te kishe mend, sikur e ke gjakun sh*rre,
sikurit i shkoi jeta me sikure,
i kujtohet tirona kur e q*nin neper mure,
don't come over here talking that grown talk,
unless you are ready to walk your death walk,
you wanna know who i am, ask your mother,
she used to beg for me to be your stepfather,
but enough banalities, let's spit realities,
let's evaluate the situation, put out the ammenities,
the truth is simple, on kristofer and me you are hating,
i didn't come to you, you came to us debating,
it took you a couple of days to put two words together,
if i asked you for one more rhyme, you probably take forever,
i'm trying to be polite, demolish you with class,
and if that don't work, i'll stick this bazooka up your *** ,
i used to live at shallvaret, you know that neighborhood,
well, f*ck you, who cares if you know about my hood,
i'm not here to act gangsta, you ain't worth my time,
but if you challenge my skill, you'll get murdered by rhyme,
it's easy to say f*ck you, it's easy to curse you out,
it's harder to WRITE A LYRIC, that's what i am about,
you wanna come to me, like you lost your goddamn mind,
f*cking with me gets you killed, your body they'll never find,
read through the lines dummy, i'm talking about lyrical crime,
i will take your breath away, one line at a time,
since you think you rhyme, come on, battle me on freestyle,
you will just be another stat, on my losers file,
so until you're ready, don't waste my breath no more,
go beat your d*ck you p*ssy, i told you that before,
for all you other haters, who riding that STEALING train,
go suck a d*ck somewhere, don't come here to complain,
kristofer hold it down, got mad love for you man,
these motherf*ckers just hating, they wanna be your fan...
 
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sumthing

Primus registratum
Re: Can You Freestyle...

i am out of here....u will never heare from me again ppl not that i am dead but i dont wanna waste me time in here i got betta things to do
see ya losers
 
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manasquan

Forumium praecox
Re: Can You Freestyle...

Sikur!!cfar ndodhi? akoma duke kerkuar?
ore para kompjutrit rime per t'kopjuar
sh*t,"gansta rime" nuk egziston n'Shqipri
kenget shqipe, man ,t'gjitha flasin per dashuri
nuk t'ka ngelur tjeter gje,cmbe shtyve ta lepish
gatuan balt gjen balt,po t'pres perseri t'vish
dita diten kalon, Sikur konvertohet n'KOKEMISH
me plot goje,ty duhet gjith robt te ti q*sh
jeta ime tani eshte GREAT,e kaluara plot veshtiresi
gjithmon kam urryer ,p*dha qe 'sbajne pergjegjesi
ky eshte freestyle por tregon ne 1fare menyre se kush je ti
u fute me 4 rreshte te kopjuara,i dhe gojes pa shkak
dole i gjakosur bishtin n'shale nuk je aq burr te maresh hak
mjaft me ty ,nuk ja vlen te humbesh kohen
meso cesht respekti,dhe hajd te vazhdosh lojen
Baltimore talenti si ty,veshtire te gjesh
SMART,GANSTA,CLASS,i ben t'gjithe t'shkojn per LESH
1 me shume ne listen e miqve
 
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X-GoodBoy

Primus registratum
Re: Can You Freestyle...

Fillimisht postuar nga devils messenger.:
[qb] i am out of here....u will never heare from me again ppl not that i am dead but i dont wanna waste me time in here i got betta things to do
see ya losers [/qb]
Click to expand...
Hahaa yeah one b*tch is out
how many others will follow him?
if you don't like the lyrics, don't read, trim!
walk away and mind your stuff
change my stle I break you in half!
There are a lot like you, be like you
but I don't care what the f*ck you do
is me man, I don't need to be a G
for motherf*ckers like you I just need to be me.
I come slow and nice mind my own way
if you cross my business, you better get the f*ck away!
I'm a Dj, yeah that's me
maybe I can't freestyler but I play my Cd's like you never see
I can mix you up and down, rap, hip-hop and R&B
trance, techno, rave, Breakdance, whatever you want G.
I can mantion you all the drink but hte best one is "RAKI"
F*ck that, sorry I'm too drunk to write right now, b*tch
I'll be back to kick some @$$ with my freestyler hit!

peace homies!
Keep the good time rollin' and never let it die!
 
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RediRock

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Re: Can You Freestyle...

i got in the net excited, to check the freestyle spot,
looking forward for a battle, por u mundova kot,
all i see is fallen angels, getting mad at their burned wings,
they have nothing better to do then offend us, the KINGS,
so your thoughts got edited, damn you are looking dumb,
now what can you do, can't curse no more son,
kristofer gave you a taste, of your own medication,
here in freestyle heaven, fallen angel is in eternal damnation,
enough about you, your thoughts couldn't make it through the censure,
you weren't smart enough, your game has no endurance,
just like your friend swallow&spit, he left the spot for good,
i still doubt that he left, he would only if he could,
he's too hooked on us, the flawless rhyming lyrics,
he'll just read from a distance, have no doubt abou this,
but hey to each their own, i'm not worried about nobody,
i'm here to put up rhymes, i'm not here to hate anybody,
i'm out of here right now, mad love to all my rappers,
Kristofer, hold it down, f*ck all them other haters.

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qafiri

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Re: Can You Freestyle...

mendohem te te kthej apo jo pergjigje
lirikat e mia te verteta ti bej kryqe
e ta gozhdoje kengen tende si nje vajtim qyqe.
nuk ia vlen.
kohe e humbur.
per nje te share pas meje si qen.
vjen duke u lutur.
se ty te pelqen.
me ndjek nga pas si klysh koken duke tundur.
POR JO ME!
Ne gracken tuaj te ndyre me nuk do me gjeni.
Une po arratisem nga ky azil i cmendur!
uroj qe veten tuaj nje dite ta keni gjetur!
see ya only in a perfect world!!
 
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olti

Neo
Re: Can You Freestyle...

Do doja dhe une te mundja te lidhja fjale si ju, por nuk mundem :shrug:

Nje kenge shqip qe per mua eshte vertet freestyle eshte kjo: "C'ka kom pas".

PS: Qe te degjoni kengen beni "right click" dhe me pas "save target as". Keshtu shkarkoni kengen dhe pas mund ta degjoni nga PC juaj. :thumbsup:
 
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RediRock

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Re: Can You Freestyle...

Neo, asnjehere mos thuaj qe nuk mundesh vllajo. Po qe se nuk e provon, nuk do ta dish nese mundesh apo jo. une personalisht te inkurajoj qe te shkruash pa e rruajtur fare se cthone te tjeret. pastaj, shiko vargjet e SIKUR... cfare kujton se mundet te shkruaje ai??? ai vjen tek tema freestyle qe te shkruaje poezi qe i kopjoi nga ndonje banke ne shkollen 8-vjecare. nejse long story short, the expression "I Can't..." does not exist. shpresoj te lexoj disa nga lirikat e tua se shpejti.
 
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manasquan

Forumium praecox
Re: Can You Freestyle...

mundohem nga forumi te heq dore
kthej koken mbrapa,aty shof baltimore
them f*ck it,mos i ler ganstas n'balt
freestyle loja jone,supozuar t'qendroj nalt
gati 5 muaj duke u shprehur pa menduar,direkt
m*therf*ckers t'pazot te dallojn t'vertetin dialekt
betej,debat,rime,kuptim,fantazi,cdo gje perfekt
man, pervoj e jetes te mua ka bere padyshim efekt
disa ket teme e marin per shaka,qoft vajz o djal
b*then n'karige ore dukemenduar,slidhin dot 2 fjal
kthehen n'qesharak ,ofendimi ,e vetmja alternativ
"sikur" me shoke,lirika juaj man, per n'koperativ.
Kjo eshte per moderatore qe fshij postime
perderisa vendosen * ne fjal,mos beni te tilla gabime
shume prej jush padyshim me vlera ne komunitet
por kur vjen te freestyle, duar lart pranojeni ket realitet
mos ushqeni xhelozi ,shfrytezoni lidhje personale
i fshini simbas qefit,shkaku gjoja "shume banale"
nqf se jetoni ne usa besoj se keni aq emancipim
perderisa shkruajm te kjo teme,respektoni cdo njerin mendim
 
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RediRock

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Re: Can You Freestyle...

i wish i could give up, i wish i could stop rhyming,
i wish i didn't care, i wish i could stop grimming,
many wishes unfulfilled, life flashes in front of my eyes,
leaving my people without knowing, leaving my mother without goodbyes,
i struggled too hard to become what i am,
at the age of 17 i had to be a grown man,
had to provide for myself, find a roof for my head,
find some food for my stomach, this life had got me bad,
but things started getting better, life started to smile at me,
my pockets getting fatter, i wish yo all could see,
finished college early, my school was in the hood,
but that's where the money is, if i could go back, i would,
i did it all yo all, pushed ye-yo, pills, you call it,
but i kept my goals clear, i knew when STOP to call it,
and now the day came, i don't hussle no more,
for the daily necessities, i don't do what i did before,
i'm trying to live honest, but others aren't letting me to,
they want me to mess up, they wanna see what i do,
i'm talking higher levels, people who got power,
the same motherf*ckers who used to call me for some powder,
now they trying hard, to kick me out of here,
they rejected my work visa, they want me to dissapear,
they don't know who they f*cking with, the Finest is determined,
can nobody decide my fate, they need to soon start learning,
i'm that motherf*cker who came in here with 50 bucks,
two T-shirts, one pair of pants, two clean pairs of socks,
five years later today, i have my own crib,
my own bank accounts, i drive my own whip,
i'm trying to live legal, i'm trying to respect the law,
what more do i have to do, what else i have to show,
i graduated with a 4.0, dual degree computers and math,
finished college in 3.5 years, no obstacles in my path,
i found a nice job, they want to sponsor my green card,
but there goes the INS, always making life hard,
they don't wanna give my visa, they want me out of here,
HELL NO motherf*ckers, can't make me dissapear,
i'm determined to succed, i will say it again,
gangstas do what they want, suckers do what they can,
i decide my fate, i choose the places i go,
i choose when to leave, if you didn't already know,
i keep my head up high, even when life hits me hard,
in this crazy living game, i play the last card,
i'm sorry yo all, i'm heated, my chest is full of anger,
and with the days going by, things ain't getting better,
i'm so tempted some times, to go back to my shed,
pull out the face masks, pull the nines from under the bed,
hit somebody for their dough, go back to my old way,
for all my grief and sorrow, make somebody else pay,
but no i won't, i can't, can't let the system rule me,
cause i am my own man, it's too hard to be me,
so i will keep struggling, until i make it happen,
either that or die, my choices are very blatant,
i'm sorry for taking your time, thanks for reading my rhyme,
thanks for taking a minute, to read the Finest's mind,
i gotta go now though, i have too much to do,
the Finest put up his lyric, so what about you...
 
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X-GoodBoy

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Re: Can You Freestyle...

Yo wazz up party ppl, did you miss me on the ground?
I'm back to spit in the next round.
Yo Baltimore, same here man
this mother f*ckers just play the same f*cking game.
It happened last year, as I still remember,
I wanted to visit Albania for 2 weeks in december.
And these b*tches did't want to give me a return visa
What was the problem?? "YOU CAN'T GET ONE, SORRY! C YA"
They put a "black sign" on my profile too
so i was denied everytime I went there, maybe worst then you.
But there are good ppl around the world, just take some time to find
2 days b4 my flight I went there for the last time
And was my lucky day, that b*tch that put me out was on his free-day
So another college was at his place, he just read the profile, didn't mind the "black sign", gave me the stamp and wished me a good day
It was so damn easy when I was trying for almost 2 months
just take it easy man, you will find the way out.
Now I'm outta here, c ya next time
Good Luck Baltimore, "don't give a f*ck", that keep it in your mind.

Peace...
 
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manasquan

Forumium praecox
Re: Can You Freestyle...

kristofer ne sfond,ne 1 tjeter kendveshtrim
ikja nga shqiperia i mir a i keq vendim?
6 vjet i aratisur,dashuria per dite duke u zmadhuar
kur ika ,n'Rinas, n'avion ,thash, ptu vend i mallkuar
memorja e mbushur plot me kujtime te femijeris
thiken ne kurriz thelle,mungesa e shoqerise
has ne racizem dialekt servilizem diskriminim
maj per maj,pushime nga puna,stres acarim
kam aritur ne piken,paraja sesht gjithcka
1 dit t'gjith do vdesim,i lodhur nga jeta me lajka
asnjehere spyes,ne marredhenie indiferent
Kristofer are u albanian? apo do te shesesh ment
jo shk*dhat ky eshte Kristofer,krenaria pershkrimi im
kujdes gojen!e para falet te dyten kaloj ne krim
por ajo qe vret ne zemer,lajme kur degjoj per vendin tim
te njejtit politikan te njejtat parti i njejti skenar
mashtrim korupsion i futen njerzit te gjalle ne var
6 vjet,duke shpresuar gjerat te marin per mire
ne vendin ku jetoj tani,ppl nuk jane me brire
shqiptaret njerez te beses,thiken deri ne palce
Nano Berisha i vertitin ,shtypin,para mbapa e q*n ket race
parlamenti i mbushur me mashtrus tpafte langaraq
shfrytezojn 5 vitet xhepat plot,milionire sa kaq
bashkite kur*at e partive ,edi rama kendon rap
p*dh motre pse nuk flet reth $$$ qe ke fut ne xhep
i mar 1 nga1,lista e pislleqeve pa mbarim
rinia? droge prostitocion, shumica var shpresat te zoti plot besim
zot qe na mohoj harroj shkrumboj snjef f*ckin meshirim
ky eshte realiteti,por sjam duke ndryshuar identitet
student,puntor,sportist,kengetar a poet
mireqenia e momentit,nuk e ndryshon fjalen kurbet
e goditur shprehja,gur i rend ne vend te vet
thjesht i mbushur sot,por jo nostalgjik
e zgjata shume me duket,be back me duhet te ik
 
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X-GoodBoy

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Re: Can You Freestyle...

Damn right my man,
"Kurbet" stays always the same.
s'ka rendesi ku je, cfare ben, si je
gjithmon do jemi vizitor, vendas veten ne atdhe.
Nje gje me ben pershtypje si harrohet shoqeria kur kalon kufirin.
bejne sikur ste njohin, ke thana ta vene zinxhirin.
F*ck it, harrojne qe nga nje vend jemi rrit
but I know you motherf*cker, don't pull to me that sh*t!
Is true that we write when we have a reason
the inspiration comes like the weather in the season.
I had this friend since my childhood and she left to U.S.A.
good friends for life, that's what we say.
keep busy with e-mail things were going ok,
until she got engaged with a motherf*cker gay.
That was ok, I didn't mind it at all,
she was just friend so nothing will fall.
This morning I got a wierd e-mail
telling me to stop writting to her, telling me to f*ck away!
I said, "Wha", who the f*ck was that?
"Yo man, you went to far away, she is now my financee"
Hmmmm, I just closed my mail and opened it again
Thought was from my sleep or a joke from a f*cking lame.
Read it again and was from my friend and her man
the girl I used to call best friend and now she is f*cking a dutch gay(?????)
that b*tch put some threats on his e-mail
like I was gonna push back, but "F*CK NO B*TCH" I ain't fail!
I never did, so there is no change to happen now
we life once, we do it right and we die proud like a lion and not a cow!
think he doens't know who is he dealing with
Me "Stoom Kop" who doesn't care for sh*t
anyway my fellows , is just I got that thing
who let's me down, it stays always in my enemies ring!
Friends are ok, but some turn you down
So f*ck them and all they got around!

Screw the law, hurt no innocents, f*ck the ***** and be proud of what we are.

Peace... and keep the good time rolling.
 
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RediRock

Primus registratum
Re: Can You Freestyle...

kristofer, i'm sitting, slowly diggesting your rhyme,
reading your rightfull thoughts, one line at a time,
it's hard to understand how we became what we are,
how come the system, didn't damage us too far,
i sit here and think, did we ever deserve this,
in the history of my people, is there something i missed,
what did we do so wrong, to deserve this damnation,
i can't find the answer, all i find is frustration,
my questions go unanswered, so do my prayers,
frustration keeps building up, on top of anger layers,
i feel like a nuke, i feel deadly dangerous,
i should walk around with a sign that says "hazardous",
don't get it twisted people, i ain't talking no gangsta sh*t,
i'm talking that real deadly feeling, the one kamikazis get,
i've been looking hard, trying to find hope for my nation,
my optimism is pesimistic, my blessing is damnation,
i've started to loose hopes, i've started to stop wondering,
but my unanswered questions, my brain are still pounding,
the main one is "why...", the next one is "how...",
why have we degenerated, how can we fix this now,
but answers are still absent, no way to be found,
should i keep looking yo all, or should i call it 12th round,
i don't know no more, what else can i do,
besides sit down here, share my heart with you,
your rhyme got me thinking, my thoughts got me writing,
my lines got me angry, my anger got me fighting,
fighting for a better day, if not for me, for you,
if not for you, for them, what else can we do,
i'm out of here yo all, kristofer, thanks for sparking my brain,
reading your rhyme made my day, although it doubled my pain...


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