Dedikime

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eniad

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Re: Dedikime

I Loved You
by Aleksandr Pushkin


I loved you; even now I may confess,
Some embers of my love their fire retain;
But do not let it cause you more distress,
I do not want to sadden you again.
Hopeless and tongue-tied, yet I loved you dearly
With pangs the jealous and the timid know;
So tenderly I loved you, so sincerely,
I pray God grant another love you so.
 
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William Wallas

Forumium maestatis
Re: Dedikime

Desiderio

-Federico Garcia Lorca


Solo il tuo cuore ardente
e niente più.

Il mio paradiso un campo
senza usignolo
né lire,
con un fiume discreto
e una fontanella.

Senza lo sprone del vento
sopra le fronde
né la stella che vuole
essere foglia.

Una grandissima luce
che fosse
lucciola
di un'altra,
in un campo di
sguardi viziosi.

Un riposo chiaro
e lì i nostri baci,
nèi sonori
dell'eco,
si aprirebbero molto lontano.

Il tuo cuore ardente,
niente più ... !!!
 
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ana karenina

Primus registratum
Re: Dedikime

Fillimisht postuar nga eniad:
[qb] I Loved You
by Aleksandr Pushkin


I loved you; even now I may confess,
Some embers of my love their fire retain;
But do not let it cause you more distress,
I do not want to sadden you again.
Hopeless and tongue-tied, yet I loved you dearly
With pangs the jealous and the timid know;
So tenderly I loved you, so sincerely,
I pray God grant another love you so. [/qb]
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Uauuu kur e mbarova e kuptova ca vjershe ishte, ne shqip e di permendesh dhe s'po i bija ne te. Sa ka te beje gjuha. Me pelqeka dhe ne ang /pf/images/graemlins/smile.gif Po kete vargun e fundit vec s'kam per ta kuptuar kurre :rolleyes:
 
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eniad

Forumium maestatis
Re: Dedikime

Fillimisht postuar nga AnNA_S.Th.:
[qb]
Fillimisht postuar nga eniad:
[qb] I Loved You
by Aleksandr Pushkin


I loved you; even now I may confess,
Some embers of my love their fire retain;
But do not let it cause you more distress,
I do not want to sadden you again.
Hopeless and tongue-tied, yet I loved you dearly
With pangs the jealous and the timid know;
So tenderly I loved you, so sincerely,
I pray God grant another love you so. [/qb]
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Uauuu kur e mbarova e kuptova ca vjershe ishte, ne shqip e di permendesh dhe s'po i bija ne te. Sa ka te beje gjuha. Me pelqeka dhe ne ang /pf/images/graemlins/smile.gif Po kete vargun e fundit vec s'kam per ta kuptuar kurre :rolleyes: [/qb]
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Kjo eshte nje nga poezite e mia te preferuara, jo vetem si poezi e thjeshte, por edhe si shprehje e emocioneve shume te forta.

Pse nuk e poston edhe ti ne shqip? Do te ishte shume bukur /pf/images/graemlins/smile.gif .

Ne lidhje me vargun e fundit, i referohesh nga ana gjuhesore (d.m.th. ne anglisht) apo si ndjesi?
 
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ana karenina

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Re: Dedikime

I referohem ndjesise, urimit. Kurre nuk do e uroja une nje gje te tille. Teper urim i paster per te qene njerezor :rolleyes: Vargu i fundit eshte thjesht letersi, hiperbole.


Te desha shume dhe ndoshta zjarri i pare
ne zemren time s'u shua pergjithnje,
Po c'ta lendoj nje plage te perthare
nuk dua te sendisesh kurre me.

Te desha shume, me ndroje, shpreseshuar,
ne heshtje, me zili, pa hapur goje.
Me c'zjarr e afsh te pata dashuruar
dhente zoti nje tjeter te te doje!

Une di qe eshte e Eseninit kjo vjersha :rolleyes:

Perkthimi eshte i Kolevices, ka edhe versione te tjera.
 
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William Wallas

Forumium maestatis
Re: Dedikime

Anormale ... !!!

Quando facevo le elementari
il maestro ci racconto' la storia
di un marinaio
che disse al capitano:
"la bandiera? spero di non
vederla piu', la bandiera!"
"molto bene," gli fu risposto,
"il tuo desiderio
sara' esaudito!"
e lo chiusero nella
stiva
e ce lo tennero,
mandandogli cibo
di sotto
e mori' laggiu'
senza vederla mai piu'
la bandiera.

una storia davvero spaventosa
per dei bambini,
molto
efficace ...

ma non efficace
abbastanza per
me ...

Stavo li' seduto a pensare,
bene, e' brutto
non vedere la
bandiera,
ma il bello e'
non dover vedere
la gente.

Pero'
non alzai la mano
per dir niente del genere ...
Sarebbe stato ammettere
che non volevo vedere
neppure loro ...
ed era vero ...

Guardavo dritto alla
lavagna
che sembrava migliore
di chiunque
di loro ... !!!

Atyre qe identifikohen !!!
 
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eniad

Forumium maestatis
Re: Dedikime

Fillimisht postuar nga AnNA_S.Th.:
[qb] I referohem ndjesise, urimit. Kurre nuk do e uroja une nje gje te tille. Teper urim i paster per te qene njerezor :rolleyes: Vargu i fundit eshte thjesht letersi, hiperbole.


Te desha shume dhe ndoshta zjarri i pare
ne zemren time s'u shua pergjithnje,
Po c'ta lendoj nje plage te perthare
nuk dua te sendisesh kurre me.

Te desha shume, me ndroje, shpreseshuar,
ne heshtje, me zili, pa hapur goje.
Me c'zjarr e afsh te pata dashuruar
dhente zoti nje tjeter te te doje!

Une di qe eshte e Eseninit kjo vjersha :rolleyes:

Perkthimi eshte i Kolevices, ka edhe versione te tjera. [/qb]
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"Dhente Zoti nje tjeter te dashte keshtu si une", eshte nga vargjet me te bukura, por nuk ka te beje, kam pershtypjen, me nje urim shume te paster idealist. E shoh si shprehjen e nje dufi, te nje mungese te forte te jetuar ne heshtje, te emocioneve te mbajtura shume fort pa i lene te dalin e ku domethenia, gjithnje per mua, do te ishte "askush nuk ka per te te dashur keshtu si une".
Nejse, letersia eshte shume personale e subjektive dhe gjithëkush ka lirine ta interpretoje si e ndjen. Ndoshta eshte pikerisht kjo liri ne perjetimin e emocioneve qe me ben ta dashuroj.

Ah, edhe nje gje tjeter, eshte poezi e Pushkinit, nje nga perkthimet me te bukura i eshte bere nga Jorgo Bllaci. /pf/images/graemlins/smile.gif
 
alinos

alinos

Forumium maestatis
Re: Dedikime

Fillimisht postuar nga eniad:
[qb]
Fillimisht postuar nga alinos:
[qb] how can I see the wind, if I have been and still feel I am the wind, therefore never been outside myself to see how it looks like to you... [/qb]
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Who said only things from outside can be seen...?? [/qb]
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askush! Ne fakt nga jashte ne vec gabime bejme, sepse nisemi me modele te gatshme dhe i fusim njerezit ne ato kallupe dhe kur personi nuk perputhet me kallupin, e ngjeshim, e presim, e kafshojme e copetojme, vec qe ai/ajo te jete i teri ne kallup. E me pas habitemi pse robt na largohen, kur nuk i kemi hedhur me pare vete ne plera... :shrug:
 
alinos

alinos

Forumium maestatis
Re: Dedikime

A Farewell to False Love

FAREWELL, false love, the oracle of lies,
A mortal foe and enemy to rest,
An envious boy, from whom all cares arise,
A bastard vile, a beast with rage possessed,
A way of error, a temple full of treason,
In all effects contrary unto reason.

A poisoned serpent covered all with flowers,
Mother of sighs, and murderer of repose,
A sea of sorrows whence are drawn such showers
As moisture lend to every grief that grows;
A school of guile, a net of deep deceit,
A gilded hook that holds a poisoned bait.

A fortress foiled, which reason did defend,
A siren song, a fever of the mind,
A maze wherein affection finds no end,
A raging cloud that runs before the wind,
A substance like the shadow of the sun,
A goal of grief for which the wisest run.

A quenchless fire, a nurse of trembling fear,
A path that leads to peril and mishap,
A true retreat of sorrow and despair,
An idle boy that sleeps in pleasure's lap,
A deep mistrust of that which certain seems,
A hope of that which reason doubtful deems.

Sith* then thy trains my younger years betrayed, [since]
And for my faith ingratitude I find;
And sith repentance hath my wrongs bewrayed*, [revealed]
Whose course was ever contrary to kind*: [nature]
False love, desire, and beauty frail, adieu.
Dead is the root whence all these fancies grew.

Sir Walter Raleigh


p.s. although sometimes I think I am giving you too much credit. In the end you proved to be so childish. Should I be sorry for myself or for you? Think about it! I am exhausted and have no intention to spend a single thought on you anymore!
 
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bebi

Primus registratum
Re: Dedikime

dolce melograno
stavo pensando cosa dedicarti?
ho deciso:
ti dedico il pensiero :wub:

peccato q1 se lexon il forumo e mu megjith' forumon /pf/images/graemlins/laugh.gif
 
alinos

alinos

Forumium maestatis
Re: Dedikime

per eniad, eventhough I do not think tomorrows will be like todays /pf/images/graemlins/wink.gif The 4th of July already passed. The 2nd and 3rd were very long days, indeed! but it is already august and soon it will be september all over again... /pf/images/graemlins/smile.gif

Goodbye!

FALLING leaf and fading tree,
Lines of white in a sullen sea,
Shadows rising on you and me;
Shadows rising on you and me;
The swallows are making them ready to fly,
Wheeling out on a windy sky.
Goodbye Summer! Goodbye! Goodbye!
Goodbye Summer! Goodbye! Goodbye!

Hush! a voice from the far away!
"Listen and learn," it seems to say,
"All the tomorrows shall be as today."
"All the tomorrows shall be as today."
The cord is frayed, the cruse is dry,
The link must break, and the lamp must die --
Goodbye to Hope! Goodbye! Goodbye!
Goodbye to Hope! Goodbye! Goodbye!

What are we waiting for? Oh, my heart!
Kiss me straight on the brows! and part again!
Again! my heart! my heart! What are we waiting for, you and I?
A pleading look, a stifled cry.
Goodbye, forever! Goodbye, forever!
Goodbye! Goodbye! Goodbye!

George John Whyte-Melville
 
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eniad

Forumium maestatis
Re: Dedikime

Fillimisht postuar nga alinos:
[QB] per eniad, eventhough I do not think tomorrows will be like todays /pf/images/graemlins/wink.gif The 4th of July already passed. The 2nd and 3rd were very long days, indeed! but it is already august and soon it will be september all over again... /pf/images/graemlins/smile.gif

/pf/images/graemlins/smile.gif The 2nd and 3d of July were long a century, whose impact quite a burstout of exploding exhaustion marked. The 4th told me my weakness was exasperatingly strong. Didn't want it to be so, but refrained from throwing away....
September, you say, yes September is raining close.... I'm scared from that "all over again".

Goodbye!

FALLING leaf and fading tree,
Lines of white in a sullen sea,
Shadows rising on you and me;
Shadows rising on you and me;
The swallows are making them ready to fly,
Wheeling out on a windy sky.
Goodbye Summer! Goodbye! Goodbye!
Goodbye Summer! Goodbye! Goodbye!

/pf/images/graemlins/smile.gif Now all that's left are fruitless fires
That burn my empty heart to dust (Pushkin and ....me /pf/images/graemlins/wink.gif )

Hush! a voice from the far away!
"Listen and learn," it seems to say,
"All the tomorrows shall be as today."
"All the tomorrows shall be as today."
The cord is frayed, the cruse is dry,
The link must break, and the lamp must die --
Goodbye to Hope! Goodbye! Goodbye!
Goodbye to Hope! Goodbye! Goodbye!

/pf/images/graemlins/smile.gif Oh when will fate restore
The joys in whose bright fire
My expectation shall expire
That I may live because I hope no more. (Tasso)

What are we waiting for? Oh, my heart!
Kiss me straight on the brows! and part again!
Again! my heart! my heart! What are we waiting for, you and I?
A pleading look, a stifled cry.
Goodbye, forever! Goodbye, forever!
Goodbye! Goodbye! Goodbye!

/pf/images/graemlins/smile.gif While unremembered and afar
I watched you as I watched a star
Through darkness strugglign into view
And Loved You, Better than You Knew /pf/images/graemlins/wink.gif
 
K

Kordelja

Valoris scriptorum
Re: Dedikime

Une ty te dedikoj zemren me gjithe rimen e shpelare qe ka brenda se ti s'ke frke as nga vaniteti as nga viriliteti ime, me do pa kushte /pf/images/graemlins/laugh.gif

:wub:
 
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Kordelja

Valoris scriptorum
Re: Dedikime

Vanity:

Definition:
[n] low table with mirror or mirrors where one sits while dressing or applying makeup
[n] the trait of being vain and conceited
[n] the quality of being valueless or futile; "he rejected the vanities of the world"
[n] feelings of excessive pride

Sipas Hyperdictionary

dhe...

[n]kreni, mburrje
[n]sqime
[n]kotesi

Sipas atij shqipo

Virility:

Definition:

[n] the trait of being manly; having the characteristics of an adult male
[n] the property of being capable of copulation and procreation

ne shqip

[n]burrerri
[n]potence...

Got my point? /pf/images/graemlins/laugh.gif
 
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Kordelja

Valoris scriptorum
Re: Dedikime

Ok, imagine me sitting on a low table with mirror while dressing and applying makeup to hide my feelings of excessive pride /pf/images/graemlins/laugh.gif

There you get the point /pf/images/graemlins/laugh.gif
 
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